January 7th, 2009
It's about how these 3 guys and 1 girl are traveling and the truck runs out of gas...
That's about all I've got... so far...
It's supposed to be a short story.Well there is a mass murder running around the streets and they find a nearby house but one of them disapere only 3 remain on the way to a nearby phone they hear the door slam.They all scream like little girls...
You could have their car run out of gas in a creepy town and make it into a ghost town story where everyone runs for their lives and whatnotOhh.. I like the idea of a ghost town
Have them meet a guy or a girl or someone and have them try and help them out and have that person turn out to be a ghost.
Sort of like in the Sixth Sense and how Bruce Willis ended up being a ghost all along.Then they get stuck in the wilderness and their cellphones have no bars. they see a sign of water nearby and they are thirsty and hot so they run towards it. when they get to it they drink without thinking. one of the guys leans so far in he falls. they wait a long time but he doesnt come back up. the girl who likes him or whatever jumps in after him in case he is drowning. they both dont return. one of the guys trys to jump in but the other one blocks him. they make a rope out of their sweatshirts and shoe laces and decide one of them goes in they yank on the rope if they are introuble. he jumps in and its a massive pull. he tries it do a tree, but they both fall in, the tree coming after them
you can use your imagination from now on. explain what it looks like. make them find their friends and (this is just an idea) you can make it so it was all just a dream....
hope my idea helped you i worked hard >.<how bout its winter time& they need a way to survive no food miles & miles away from sivilization & cell phones have no signal..ppl will be interestedThe three guys make the girl go out and push the truck to a gas station that is 10 miles away.What kind of story do you want it to be? Horror, emotional/sad, emotional/uplifting, funny?
The truck could run out of gas and they get picked up by a local who tries to kill them.
They could fight and struggle to survive and come through stronger and happier people.
They could do one wrong thing after another and get into absurd situations.
how about have them argue about who's fault it is that they ran out of gas and who should walk to get more and who should stay with the truck...(she didn't want to stop but he said they had a full tank, but he didn't stop to check, but it was his truck so he should go etc...) and then what happens to each group... a budding romance at the truck and the failing friendship on the walk for gas and how the whole thing ultimatly brings them all closer together.you could make it some kind of deep thing from each of their point of views like how they feel about it-
girl scared
guy1- perverted and creepy
guy2- nice, kind, like girl
almost typical, they get out searching for help, guy1 is trying to impede them and ditch them because he thinks they'll never escape, girl and guy2 are genuine and want to find help, and also don't know that guy1 is bad
it would be cool to have each chapter or passage for a short story, to switch POV's but pick up where or a little bit after the person before them left off.
it might be a little hard though.wow thats a really short storyOne thing to remember in a short story is that every word counts and action happens very quickly. What genre are you shooting for? Horror? Mystery? Action? Think about what genre and think of something that fits into the category. Then let the personality of your characters respond to it. :)#If you have any other info about this subject , Please add it free.# |
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